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Friday, 2 August 2019

Warsaw-By Ellma

Learning Intention: We are learning to write a fantasy writing.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a fantasy writing using capital letters and full stops in paragraph form correctly.

Once upon a time, in a beautiful tree filled forest, lived an enormous,bright green, purple fire breathing dragon named "Warsaw". He was lonely because he had no friends. People thought he was scary and ugly. He did not like the way  how people were treating him.

One day, in a town named "Anthair", Warsaw blew out fire at houses. Wonder woman knew their was going to be a war between a dragon. She rushed to him, when Warsaw saw her, he was displeased and blew fire at Wonder woman, but he missed. Then Wonder Woman grabbed her golden lasso and swung it around, Warsaw. Warsaw looked at the rope, until he got very unsteady.

While Wonder woman was swinging the rope around Warsaw, she grabbed him and knocked him over with a loud thud!
The people thanked Wonder Woman for defeating Warsaw. Wonder Woman was glad to see them cheerful.

Comment: Interesting words Ellma, good writing. Thanks for being my greatest partner, Yesha.

A Visit To The Stone Cottage-By Ellma

Learning Intention: We are learning to write a recount.

Success Criteria: I know I am successful when I can write a recount about the Stone Cottage.

Do you know what games the school children play ?

The games the Fencible children play are leap frog, tag, hide and seek, seak and relay races. They are really fun games for those times.

Inside the living room I saw a big family bible. I wish I could have opened it but I couldn't because the sign said "Do Not Touch". The bible was old and dusty and also had allot of webs. 

In the kitchen I saw a typewriter. Kids were not allowed to touch the typewriter because it was for the adults only. The typewriter is black and small and it was invented on July 23 1929 and was given to William Austin Burt and the person who made the typewriter was Christopher Latham Sholes. 

Spring Petals-By Ellma

Learning Intention: We are learning to write  a poem.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a poem.

Petals on my hair,
Petals on my nose,
Spring is throwing petals everywhere.
Petals on my roof,
Petals on my shoes,
Spring is making me poof.

Petals on the park,
Petals on the car,
Spring is playing with tons of bark.

Petals on the bus,
Petals on the stairs,
Spring is making a big fuss.

Fruit Cup-By Ellma

                                     Fruit Cup
Learning Intention: W.A.L.T-write a explanation.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a explanation using words like first second,third,then, next, lastly and finally.

Ingredients: Lettuce, pineapple, apple, kiwifruit and cream.


First, wash your hands and the fruit too.


Second, wash the lettuce. 


Third, peel the skin of the kiwifruit.


Then, cut the fruit into bits of pieces.


Next, put all the fruit you cut into a big container.


Lastly, put some cream in the fruit and mix it.


Finally, eat it, it'll be delicious.


  

Lettuce Spring Roll-By Ellma

Learning Intention: W.A.L.T-write instructions.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write instructions.

Ingredients 
1)Lettuce
2)Cooked Mince Meat
3)Carrots
4)Boiled eggs

First, wash you hands.
Second, wash the lettuce.
Third, cut the boiled egg into quarters.
Next, put the boiled eggs onto the lettuce.
Lastly, put the mince meat on top of the lettuce and egg.
Finally, roll up the lettuce and EAT IT!!!!



What I think Heaven means




Learning Intention:W.A.L-what heaven means.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can draw a my imagination of heaven. 





Alice in Wonderland-by Ellma

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-write a narrative.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a narrative story about Alice in wonder land.

                 Alice in Wonderland


Once upon a time their lived me, Alice. Me and my sister went to an magical forest. My sister then said "let's play hide-and-seek" I agreed with her. While my sister was counting I hid in a tree whole but then I fell somewhere random.

I started exploring the place. Then I slipped and found a key on the floor, I picked it up, then five doors appeared out of nowhere. I tried to open all of them with the key but wouldn't open. I walked away sad, but then a small door appeared, I tried opening it with the key and it opened. I was happy but I was to big so I couldn't fit. I walked away sad. While I was walking I saw a drink that said "drink me". When I drank it I shrunk then I opened the door once again and went in. 

When I went in the door a saw cards using a red potion and turning flowers red. I was uncomfortable watching them turn the flowers red so I walked away. While my walk I heard a loud noise so I followed where the noise was coming from. When I arrived it was a game of cricket so I sat down and watched. 

People started fighting because of some braggers thinking they will win the trophy. Right after they were fighting I was about to leave but then I grew back to my size. Then when the queen of hearts saw me she thought I was going to kill them so she said to her guards "chop her head off" I grabbed them and threw them away. After that I woke up and found out it was a dream, I was happy it was not real.