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Thursday 13 August 2015

Persuasive Writing: Argue Against Chocolate



                                                                                


I think children should not be allowed to eat chocolates whenever they want to because they are not good for them.  
They are full of sugar and they are too sweet. Chocolates are bad for their teeth. Sweets rot their teeth.  Eating too many will make them feel sick. I think children should only be allowed to eat one chocolate for a treat. 
So children keep away from chocolates!!!














                                   

2 comments:

  1. Hi Ellma, I like your pictures and the facts you used.

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