Tuesday, 28 August 2018

My Prayer-by Ellma

Learning Intention: W.A.L.T- How to create a simple prayer Kara KIA is meant to affect the way people live.

                                        πŸ’–My PrayerπŸ’–

Dear loving God please help all the sick people in the world and 
also please make people kind to one another. I'm sorry for my sins. Thank you for my family and friends.Amen.

Success Criteria: I know I am successful when I can create a simple prayer to God.

My Autobiography--By Ellma

Learning Intention:We are learning how to write our autobiography.

Success Criteria: I know I am successful when I can write about my autobiography and use adjectives .



My name is Ellma and I am 8 years old. I was born in September 2009. My fun loving parents are Manu and Sue. My playful brothers are Pao, Nathan and Nixcent and my only big tall sister is Dehnyse. 

My loving and pretty aunties are Tracey, Genie, Sia, Lepa and Julie and my handsome and brave uncles are Wayne, Fano, Nicky and Vinngie. My kind and hardworking grandparents are Leonia, Lotto, Osa and Rusia.

My favourite book is Ella's Diary. It is interesting. I like to play  volleyball because I can hit the ball and jump up to get a score for my team. I like the songs  Roar and Count Your Blessing. It  so catchy it makes me dance.

I like to learn maths and spelling. My favourite TV shows and Movies are Rampage and the Three Wise Cousins. I like them because they are so funny and sad at the same time. I like to eat spaghetti, mango, noodles, salad, meat and pizza. They are so delicious that I can eat more all day long.

My friends are AngelinaGiselleYesha, AprilTyrah, Lolenese, Lupe and Meleana. My favourite colours are blue, green, red, orange and gold.  

Standing Up For Others-By Ellma

Learning Intention: We are learning how to write a prayer.

Dear God please help me to be kind to others and help me to stand up for others who are getting bullied. Amen.

Success Criteria: I know I am successful when I can write a prayer.                    


Monday, 27 August 2018

All About Me-By Ellma

Learning Intention: We are learning to write a recount.
Success Criteria: I know I am successful when I can write about myself.

Hi my name is Ellma and my birthday is in September 2009.  I study at St.Patrick's school for 4 years now. I have 1 sister and 3 brothers and I love my youngest brother. I live in Panmure, Auckland. My favourite sport is netball and soccer.
I like eating spaghetti, mangoes and apples. I like drinking water and juice. My best friend is Lolenese. The movie I like to watch is "The Three Wise Cousins". I love the colour blue.   

Wednesday, 8 August 2018

Danny the Lion-by Ellma

Learning Intention: We are learning to write a narrative story.

Success Criteria: I know I am successful when I can use full stops, capital letters correctly, and in paragraph form. 
                                 Danny the Lion
A long time ago in the jungle lived a humongous lion named Danny. He had nice fur over his body and he eats other animals that came near him. He always played with his friend named Jake.

One day it was Danny's birthday, he invited his  friend Jake. Danny was hoping Jake would come to his birthday. At his birthday he waited for Jake but, sadly he never showed up. Danny was so sad because Jake never came, he was upset.

Three weeks later Danny went to Jake's house to see where Jake was. The door was unlocked so Danny went inside. Danny was looking everywhere for Jake, but he wasn't there. A few minutes later Danny found a note in his bedroom. It said "I am sorry, we moved jungles".

A few years later Danny forgot all about Jake. It was Danny's day off from school, when their was a knock on the door. Danny rushed to open the door.  He was surprised because it was his friend Jake. They both cried of joy and from then on when Jake moved he told Danny.