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Friday 2 August 2019

Warsaw-By Ellma

Learning Intention: We are learning to write a fantasy writing.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a fantasy writing using capital letters and full stops in paragraph form correctly.

Once upon a time, in a beautiful tree filled forest, lived an enormous,bright green, purple fire breathing dragon named "Warsaw". He was lonely because he had no friends. People thought he was scary and ugly. He did not like the way  how people were treating him.

One day, in a town named "Anthair", Warsaw blew out fire at houses. Wonder woman knew their was going to be a war between a dragon. She rushed to him, when Warsaw saw her, he was displeased and blew fire at Wonder woman, but he missed. Then Wonder Woman grabbed her golden lasso and swung it around, Warsaw. Warsaw looked at the rope, until he got very unsteady.

While Wonder woman was swinging the rope around Warsaw, she grabbed him and knocked him over with a loud thud!
The people thanked Wonder Woman for defeating Warsaw. Wonder Woman was glad to see them cheerful.

Comment: Interesting words Ellma, good writing. Thanks for being my greatest partner, Yesha.

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