Learning Intention:W.A.L-what heaven means.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can draw a my imagination of heaven.
Friday, 2 August 2019
Alice in Wonderland-by Ellma
Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-write a narrative.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a narrative story about Alice in wonder land.
Alice in Wonderland
Once upon a time their lived me, Alice. Me and my sister went to an magical forest. My sister then said "let's play hide-and-seek" I agreed with her. While my sister was counting I hid in a tree whole but then I fell somewhere random.
I started exploring the place. Then I slipped and found a key on the floor, I picked it up, then five doors appeared out of nowhere. I tried to open all of them with the key but wouldn't open. I walked away sad, but then a small door appeared, I tried opening it with the key and it opened. I was happy but I was to big so I couldn't fit. I walked away sad. While I was walking I saw a drink that said "drink me". When I drank it I shrunk then I opened the door once again and went in.
When I went in the door a saw cards using a red potion and turning flowers red. I was uncomfortable watching them turn the flowers red so I walked away. While my walk I heard a loud noise so I followed where the noise was coming from. When I arrived it was a game of cricket so I sat down and watched.
People started fighting because of some braggers thinking they will win the trophy. Right after they were fighting I was about to leave but then I grew back to my size. Then when the queen of hearts saw me she thought I was going to kill them so she said to her guards "chop her head off" I grabbed them and threw them away. After that I woke up and found out it was a dream, I was happy it was not real.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a narrative story about Alice in wonder land.
Alice in Wonderland
Once upon a time their lived me, Alice. Me and my sister went to an magical forest. My sister then said "let's play hide-and-seek" I agreed with her. While my sister was counting I hid in a tree whole but then I fell somewhere random.
I started exploring the place. Then I slipped and found a key on the floor, I picked it up, then five doors appeared out of nowhere. I tried to open all of them with the key but wouldn't open. I walked away sad, but then a small door appeared, I tried opening it with the key and it opened. I was happy but I was to big so I couldn't fit. I walked away sad. While I was walking I saw a drink that said "drink me". When I drank it I shrunk then I opened the door once again and went in.
When I went in the door a saw cards using a red potion and turning flowers red. I was uncomfortable watching them turn the flowers red so I walked away. While my walk I heard a loud noise so I followed where the noise was coming from. When I arrived it was a game of cricket so I sat down and watched.
People started fighting because of some braggers thinking they will win the trophy. Right after they were fighting I was about to leave but then I grew back to my size. Then when the queen of hearts saw me she thought I was going to kill them so she said to her guards "chop her head off" I grabbed them and threw them away. After that I woke up and found out it was a dream, I was happy it was not real.
Meanings of Christmas Decorations-By Ellma❤
Learning Intention:W.A.L.T- understand meanings of some Christmas Decorations.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can read and understand, the meaning of some Christmas Decorations.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can read and understand, the meaning of some Christmas Decorations.
Letter Invitation+Sleeping Beauty Visits St. Patrick's- By Ellma
Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-write a letter of invitation.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a letter of invitation.
Dear Sleeping Beauty,
I am inviting you to come and visit St. Patrick's School and spend the day with me and my friends.
Sleeping Beauty Visits St. Patricks
Learning Intention:W.A.L.T- a write creative narrative story.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can change the beginning and ending of my story.
One day, a couple of months ago I invited my friend Sleeping Beauty to come play with me and my classmates. When I arrived in the classroom she was standing in the middle of the class. I gave her the biggest hug and my friends did too.
First we played tag. She was amazing at that game. She tagged all of us including the fast people. I was so surprised. After playing she took a rest and played with the boys.
Sleeping Beauty and the boys played hide-and-seek. She was good at that game too. When the boys were in, they couldn't find her, but when she was in, she found them easily. The boys were so embarrassed because they were boys and she was a girl and the boys thought they were better then girls. She laughed and we laughed with her. The boys were annoyed.
The bell rang for lunch and we all sat with Sleeping Beauty. While Sleeping Beauty was waiting for us to finish our food she told us some funny jokes, and we all laughed. We all tried making her laugh but our jokes were not that funny, unlike Sleeping Beauty's.
Later Sleeping Beauty had to leave, but before she left she told us one more joke and it was funnier then the jokes she told us before. Finally we gave her a c big bear hug and said goodbye to her. She was awesome to play with.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a letter of invitation.
Dear Sleeping Beauty,
I am inviting you to come and visit St. Patrick's School and spend the day with me and my friends.
Sleeping Beauty Visits St. Patricks
Learning Intention:W.A.L.T- a write creative narrative story.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can change the beginning and ending of my story.
First we played tag. She was amazing at that game. She tagged all of us including the fast people. I was so surprised. After playing she took a rest and played with the boys.
Sleeping Beauty and the boys played hide-and-seek. She was good at that game too. When the boys were in, they couldn't find her, but when she was in, she found them easily. The boys were so embarrassed because they were boys and she was a girl and the boys thought they were better then girls. She laughed and we laughed with her. The boys were annoyed.
The bell rang for lunch and we all sat with Sleeping Beauty. While Sleeping Beauty was waiting for us to finish our food she told us some funny jokes, and we all laughed. We all tried making her laugh but our jokes were not that funny, unlike Sleeping Beauty's.
Later Sleeping Beauty had to leave, but before she left she told us one more joke and it was funnier then the jokes she told us before. Finally we gave her a c big bear hug and said goodbye to her. She was awesome to play with.
Why do we Celebrate Christmas
Learning Intention: W.A.L.T-write a explanation.
💚Why do we Celebrate Christmas❤
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a explanation using capital letters, adjectives and full stops correctly.
💚Why do we Celebrate Christmas❤
We celebrate Christmas, because we are celebrating the birthday of Jesus. Jesus is like a gift to us because he died on the cross for us to forgive our sins. We are really grateful for Jesus to be alive because he healed a lot of sick people.
We celebrate Christmas, because we can spend more time with family and friends. We can play sports like volleyball, and touch. We can go on trips to other cities, including other countries.
We celebrate Christmas because we can wrap presents and leave cookies and milk for Santa to eat and drink. We can also be surprised of what gift he will give us. We can send gifts to your relatives or friends to another country or you can be the gift to them.
We celebrate Christmas, because we can spend more time with family and friends. We can play sports like volleyball, and touch. We can go on trips to other cities, including other countries.
We celebrate Christmas because we can wrap presents and leave cookies and milk for Santa to eat and drink. We can also be surprised of what gift he will give us. We can send gifts to your relatives or friends to another country or you can be the gift to them.
My Summer Holiday-By Ellma
On Saturday me and my family went to Manurewa to play golf. The place we went to was called Golf Raging. Before going we went to packinsave to buy some drinks, the drinks we bought were Lipton, Coke, Gatorade, Mountain dew and water. Also the Food we bought were some watermelons and chips.
Then we went to Golf raging. We had to pay $14 to get our number ticket for golf balls. Then we went to find our golf clubs. After that we went to get our golf balls, we got about 100 I think. Than we went to find our stations.
When we found our stations we got all our golf balls and put them on this white stand. Their was also a line on the deck, you can't cross the line or you'll get hit with the golf club. When I had my turn I tried my best to hit the golf ball because I kept on missing and then I finally hit it but it was a small hit. Then it was my cousins turn I shouted out "hit it hit it" then she hit it to the 100. I didn't expect it to go their I wanted it to be in the 50.
Then we went to KFC because we were hungry, we had fries, Sparkling Raspberry and Coke. Then we went home and took a little nap. I had a good time with my cousins.
When we found our stations we got all our golf balls and put them on this white stand. Their was also a line on the deck, you can't cross the line or you'll get hit with the golf club. When I had my turn I tried my best to hit the golf ball because I kept on missing and then I finally hit it but it was a small hit. Then it was my cousins turn I shouted out "hit it hit it" then she hit it to the 100. I didn't expect it to go their I wanted it to be in the 50.
Then we went to KFC because we were hungry, we had fries, Sparkling Raspberry and Coke. Then we went home and took a little nap. I had a good time with my cousins.
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